Ms. Vance Online Art Portfolio

For my business plan school project, my team is working on a Child's after school and summer program. Here is the logo I made. In any logo there can be a lot of choices and difference of what to make the logo and make the business work. ALL IN THE SKY INC., this is great ans simplistic. Some businesses want a logo that is goos but simple. Another option is changing the logo but changing "Better to Brighter" Which one would you choose?

Here is a piece I did for my friend and his story! Please look him up such as Baylen Clark, and his business BARCsolutions. He is on IG and Facebook. http://www.heart2heartinc.org/home.html